Been playing with this piece for awhile, decided to cut the line lengths to see if it opened up. Let me know what you think.
The Young Widower
looks out at his garden and becomes old, there in the sun. The buttons of his sweater loosen and fray, hanging loose on his bones. Just above the baked brown soil the tomatoes splitting, festering, over-ripe; and the corn, dead in its stalks, unharvested.